Feedback on First Draft

On Tuesday's lesson we all watched each others drafts and gave feedback on them. This was done so that we could improve our sequence as much as possible to get into the higher grade boundaries. As a group the feedback that we were given was;

• Add more credits to the opening of the thriller so that our clip is elongated as it is too short at the moment.


• Some of our shots are too exposed to the light so we most probably need to reshoot and create new footage but with the same shots.


• Make the sequence longer as it does not reach the two minute mark as it needs to.


• Add a soundtrack to create tension for the person watching.

I think that if we want to improve our thriller that we should also try to get inside of a church. When we shot the inside shots we were inside Emma's house and although we had the camera at a birds eye angle, the bed in the background was still in vision. This was disappointing but something we can film again in a proper location that fits the scene.